June 22, 2006

Building the UNHCE homepage


Do you have an idea for a piece you’d like to publish on the UNHCE Web homepage?  Call or email me! Please!

Part of my job involves recruiting material for our homepage to keep it fresh and timely, working with staff to develop Web-ready articles and appropriate graphic elements, and getting the “products” to Faye for posting. Paul (my supervisor) and Holly (my ally and sounding board) collaborate on this venture.

So, what makes a good homepage feature?
First and foremost, it should exemplify clean, easy-to-understand prose that people find interesting to read, that delivers on the promise of its title and opening lines, and that shows awareness of and respect for readers’ needs.

The homepage itself doesn’t have a specific, carefully targeted audience. Its audience includes anyone who comes to the page. Ideally, writers should use links to direct various reader groups to related materials that might interest them.

Because Internet users experience Web pages as places they go to, travel around in, and leave, writers should work to create a special ambiance that connects to New Hampshire people and piques the interest of anyone who drops in for a visit. Even if they just cruise in and out without reading anything all the way through, or don’t have an interest in the specific topics, site visitors should leave thinking, “Hey, I want to come back here soon.”

Writing for the Web allows you to write a little and point to a lot. The hyperlinked Web environment gives writers the power to introduce a topic, then open it to vast realms of territory, letting readers themselves make their own travel plans.

Links can lead readers to pages that clarify, offer history, add context, provide nuanced or highly technical detail, reveal contradictory points of view, satisfy different learning styles, permit discussion, foster collaborative research, and more.

Research shows that professionals/experts enhance their credibility on the Web as much by what they point to as by what they themselves write.

The Web uniquely empowers all users to respond, publish, comment, review, critique, and add their own ideas, as well as to build both ad hoc and enduring communities of discourse, planning, research and action. This capability approaches the ideal of engagement the Kellogg Foundation has suggested as the key to survival of the land-grant universities and the cooperative extension system associated with them: two-way, even multi-party communication to which each party brings knowledge, skill and experience and in which each individual participates as both learner and teacher.

Done well, our homepage can serve our visitors’ needs for timely information, while simultaneously serving other purposes. Some of these include:

  • promoting our programs and those of our key partnerships and coalitions
  • developing new forms of social capital
  • encourages interdisciplinary thinking/linking between and among CE program units
  • serving as a powerful social marketing tool

Tomorrow I’ll introduce some specific elements of the ideal homepage feature.

Posted by pboyles at 9:49 AM

June 20, 2006

Writing an op-ed

“Op-ed” essays appear in the section of a newspaper that contains its editorials (which reflect the position of the paper itself), letters to the editor and regular columns (which differ from news in that they specifically represent the writer’s opinions). Prominently placed, op-ed essays typically deliver a compelling perspective on a topic of broad public interest. The op-ed pieces most likely to get published come from authors with strong credentials or broad personal or professional experience that qualifies them to speak to the topic at hand.

Many people think of op-eds as expressing strong, one-sided opinions. Often they do. But an op-ed essay can also give voice to the voiceless, illuminate key sides of an issue that others have missed, or help readers understand multiple perspectives on a topic. Some of the best op-eds simply provide compelling facts intended to elevate the level of public understanding on all sides of a hot topic.

You, your volunteers, or your clientele might consider writing an op-ed, for instance, when you want to mobilize community energy and attract resources to an issue of broad public concern, or when you want to introduce the plans or the work of a community coalition.

Tips on writing a good piece and helping ensure it gets published:

  • Focus on a single theme. State your purpose clearly in the opening sentences.
  • Use humor when appropriate, but avoid sarcasm. Biting sarcasm often hurts people and may diminish support for your issue.
  • If you plan to offer critical analysis of a situation, take the high road: criticize ideas, not people. Avoid any references that present another person in a negative light; these might constitute libel, defamation of character, or malicious slander.
  • Don’t allow your passion for your topic to exaggerate and don’t state facts you can’t support. Speak simply, from the heart. Use strong, compelling facts. Aim to elevate the level of public understanding rather than tear down the arguments of those you disagree with.
  • Tell a story. “Speak out” your message onto paper. Focus on the concrete, human impacts of your issue. Note how it affects real people—their environment, their family life, their health, their quality of life. If you can find a strong quote, use it. Readers respond to a real human voice.
  • Don’t worry about “unbiased objectivity.” Instead, seek balance and inclusiveness. Show you’re conversant with the many aspects of a topic and understand various points of view.
  • Use active verbs. Say, Burton delivered the report in May, instead of, The report was delivered in May. Avoid overusing the verb to be: am, are, was, were, be, been, being. These verb constructions rob your prose of power, may cause confusion, and can deliver meanings you don’t intend.
  • Cut every word that doesn’t perform important work. Use strong nouns and strong verbs instead of cluttering your piece with adjectives and adverbs.
  • Use common, everyday words. Don’t try to “professionalize” your prose with jargon and 50-cent words. Expressing yourself clearly and simply doesn’t equate with “dumbing down.” No editor ever turned down a piece of written work because she found it “much too comprehensible” or “too easy to understand.”
  • If you use an acronym, write out its full title the first time, with the acronym in parentheses immediately following, e.g., University of New Hampshire Cooperative Extension (UNHCE).

A few more tips:

  • Target your op-ed to the readers of one newspaper, and send it out to only one news outlet.
  • Try not to send your op-ed piece “cold.” Instead, if you know someone who works at the newspaper, or can finagle an introduction to the editorial page editor, call him or her, explain what you have in mind and ask for advice on getting published.
  • Accompany your op-ed with a well-written cover letter, two or three paragraphs that explain a little about the experience or credentials that qualify you to write this piece, along with a sentence or two about why your topic matters to the paper’s readers.
  • Don’t represent yourself as speaking for a group unless the group has given you explicit permission to serve as a spokesperson. Even then, have the group select a couple of “editors” to review your final piece before you send it out.

 

More on writing op-ed

Posted by pboyles at 7:20 AM

June 19, 2006

Writing letters to the Editor


Among the most-read sections of most newspapers and many newsletters, the Letters to the Editor section gives you (or your clientele) a chance to present your perspective on an issue and its relevance to your community, praise a volunteer or a colleague, or promote a coming event.

Because many newspapers and newsletters publish most of the letters they receive, your letter stands a good chance of getting published. A campaign that encourages your supporters, volunteers, or clientele to write letters could prove more effective for promoting an event or program than sending out a generic press release.

Before you sit down to write, learn the newspaper’s word limit on letters to the editor, then stay well within it. If you don’t edit down your letter, someone at the paper will do it for you. (Warning: Newspapers generally don’t edit out mistakes. Meticulously scrub your letters for spelling, grammatical, and other errors.)

Some papers have a Board of Community Contributors, a My Turn, First Person or Voice of the People column that lets local people sound off in a longer space with a more prominent placement on the editorial pages. People who become known for writing strong, thoughtful letters may find may it easier to get one of these longer pieces published.

 

Draft your letter, making your main point in the lead sentence and following up with one or two supporting points. Keep your focus narrow.

Keep your tone civil and respectful, avoiding sarcasm and personal attack. Write with power:

  • Cut weak descriptive words: e.g., very, fantastic, extremely, extraordinary, wonderful, great, terrific).
  • Don't waste space with old clichés: e.g., “tough as nails,” “stepped up to the plate,” “at the end of the day,” “when all is said and done,” “worth its weight in gold.”
  • Don’t “professionlize” your letter with important-sounding words and jargon. Choose common, everyday words. Write “lives,” rather than “resides,” “help,” instead of “assist,” “before” instead of “prior.”

If you have credentials or experience that adds credibility to your voice, work them into your letter or your signature.

If possible, let your letter sit a few hours before you send it. Ask someone you trust, preferably someone who doesn’t know much about your topic, to read it for coherence and tone, as well as for grammar, syntax and “flow.”

Posted by pboyles at 7:20 AM

December 2, 2005

Letters to the editor

Many Extension professionals work with clientele who need ways to publicize events or articulate their points of view to community-wide audiences. Almost all of us work with people who feel frustrated that their own perspectives on the topics they know something about and that matter to them never seem to get represented in mainstream press accounts on the topic.

Why not encourage them to write letters to the editor? You could even set up workshops where people can learn the basics of writing a good letter, draft letters, and/or read and comment on each other’s letters before they submit them for publication.

Among the most-read sections of the newspaper, the Letters to the Editor section gives a paper’s readers as chance to become writers. A letter to the editor can present a particular perspective on an topic, criticize the paper’s coverage of a topic, or rally community support for a cause.

Because many newspapers publish most of the letters they receive, each letter stands a good chance of getting published. People who become known in the community for writing strong, thoughtful letters may find it easier to publish their work in the community op-ed (opinion-editorial) sections many papers have instituted, sections with names such as Community Forum, Voice of the People, My Turn, or First Person that give local people more space and a more prominent place on the editorial pages sound off.

A few tips you can pass along (or use yourself):

• Before you sit down to write, learn the newspaper’s word limit on letters to the editor. Plan to stay well within it. Remember, if you don’t edit your letter, someone at the paper—typically a harried editor with little or no knowledge of your issue—will do it for you.

• In your final draft, make your main point in the lead sentence and follow up with one or two supporting points. If you have credentials or long experience that lends credibility to your voice, mention it in your letter or append your credentials to your signature.

• Always keep your tone civil and respectful, avoiding sarcasm and personal attack.

• When citing facts, document (or make sure you can document) your sources. Especially when questioning published facts, back up your point of view with facts accepted by a broad diversity of credible sources.

• If possible, let your letter sit a few hours before you send it. Ask a couple of people you trust, preferably folks who don’t know (or care) much about your topic, to read it for coherence and tone, as well as for grammar, syntax and “flow.”


Posted by pboyles at 12:30 PM





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